Saturday, July 24, 2010

Limerick

There was once a young man from Wimbledon ,
who liked drinking wine,
one day he found a huge container of wine that was fine,
so he drank and drank until he was trembled on.

1 comment:

  1. Dear Peiyu,
    I don't really think that this is a limerick. A limerick should have five lines and rhymes in the first, second and last line and rhymes in the third and fourth line. This poem is not really a limerick as it does not satisfy all the conditions stated above.

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